Demented (Rough Cut)
In this cut there was several problems with the opening sequence. There was many random transitions that made the opening very messy. There was conventions that weren't followed, such as our production etc. Also there was many narratives which made the opening confusing to all audiences. Even audiences watching the opening several times didn't help them understand the gist of the narrative.
Also, our credits varied in font, colour and position which didn't follow the conventions of how credits should look in an opening sequence. We also didn't place the right sound effects in the correct places to create emphasis. All these factors caused us to loose marks.
Also, our credits varied in font, colour and position which didn't follow the conventions of how credits should look in an opening sequence. We also didn't place the right sound effects in the correct places to create emphasis. All these factors caused us to loose marks.
Demented (Final Cut)
In this new and improved final cut, we fixed all factors that caused us to loose marks. The first thing we improved was inserting our production at the beginning of our opening (just after the universal opening). We added in some fades and effects to make the beginning look realistic. We also improved the narrative by deleting unnecessary footage to simply the narrative, instead of too much happening at once. We also made the opening simplistic by, changing all the fonts and colours of the credits so, they're all the same. We also made sure that very piece of footage had the right effect, which was 'Dream'. This effect helped the flashback scene's look more realistic. We also fixed sound effect effects in the correct places to cause emphasis. We also added in a few voiceovers so, audiences can actually understand the narrative more effectively. All these changes has helped us achieve the marks that we need top obtain a good grade.